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 still working on this, getting back in to subd modelling after years of zbrush frustration:) |
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| I like the colors - and gradients on the throusers. Little suggestion: imagine the pig would not wear the hat: how would the ears then look ;-) -> pigs have way shorter ears, so only the tips should be visible (imho). axe is more low-poly than the character. They should be "visually equal", so maybe spend some more polygons (or smooth shade) on the handle. Maybe also make it assymetric (like on an axe-handle) - especially with "used" handles, they get a b it less "bulky" on one side of the handle. Shoes: (ignoring the pig foot ... :-): the "instep part" of the boots look a bit small - maybe make it more bulky (the pig must be able to do some "dirt work" like digging for gold) - for now it fits to "non existing foot" (or if you have a devil with goat feet). Regardless of this: do not get me wrong, I really would like to be able to do such models (I suck at organic modelling ;-)). So for now it is a really great job - and I hope my hints do even improve it more. bye Ron |
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| yeah the hat is a little problematic, but I am working on tying it in RE the ears, well it is a certoon style big, so the ear size is not an issue for me least axe had not been subdivided in this picture, everything else has boots def need a bit of work on them, thanks for the feedback. don't want to go too detailed on these really I was going to do a zbrush pass, but maybe not main focus has been on getting nice topology and doing my own concept for a change. |
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| Ears: the "long" ears remove the pig-appearance for me....of course this is a matter of personal taste. Nice topology: yeah really looks good. Between eyes, nose and cheeks you have a pole-vertex on each side. think you could at least remove one edge by refining the surrounding edge loops. Do not understand me wrong: for me the topology is really good but as I needed to find a flaw (everybody needs to improve ;-)) ... So you are doing a farmer/western game? Bye Ron |
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| Derron, yeah i fixed that pole business on the cheeks, someone else pointed that out on Polycount also. might revisit the ears with a morph target in the future re the game , yeah i had an idea about a game for this, but have a long way to go in terms of learning unity/scripting etc, but you have to start somewhere right:) |
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  gonna do some nice morph targets for the head next |
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