Girl: 3d model !!!
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| Hi all. This is a 3d model i made in my free times for an idea that i have. (I continue with Century project, of course :-)). The model has 2700 polys. [img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/im1.jpg"] [img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/im2.jpg"] [img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/im4.jpg"] |
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| Excellent work, especially for such a low poly count. |
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| The skin is superb, I think you need to add more shape to the hips and the outfit is a bit too fitting (around the boobs!) |
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| I think theres an as yet untapped niche for flat-chested female computer game characters! That aside, really nice work. :) |
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| Very nice model, L_Draven. I find her breasts a little un-nerving and she seems to have a very pronounced 'lunch box' for a lady but, aside from that, I like it. Have fun. |
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| Excellent model!! What size of texture map did you use? |
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| mrtricks, I find it amusing you consider her flat-chested. I think you may have your standards skewed by the typical videogame female proportions of Lara Croft. |
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| Quality work |
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| Flat chested? Someone needs to lay off the internet porn and get a reality check. |
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| Stunning O.o |
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| Her top tummies seem to high or else her body seems a tincey bit too long (unless I have seen far too many hanging) - but it is a chuffingly good model - love the crouching/kneeling shot - very professional looking! |
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| Her head seems too small. Makes the rest of her look kind of giant. A Goth Space Angel. Nice modelling work. Impressive. |
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| Her head seems too small I was just thinking of making a joke about 'a little head', but you kinda beat me to it. So I won't. :) |
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| You should Mesh Smooth it. |
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| Nice model, although she looks almost verging on manly |
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| awesome textures and work but the head is kinda small maybe add a little to more muscle to her arms to even out the size her torso looks huge compared to the rest...nice rack tho |
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| nice!!! ;-) |
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| Very nice but maybe a bit too 'masculine' - especially in the last shot - Looks like a bloke with boobs ! |
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| luv your choice wardrobe... (very nice model too) --Mike |
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| Luverly but enlarge the head, lower her breasts and give her a little padding :) Andy |
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| Her masculine shape might look ok at the side of a muscle man ala wiking warrior or conan type guy. The relative small head might be a style element, just like all anime heads are way too big. |
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| ...definately a very nice model and looks efficiently unwrapped!! Great stuff |
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| [URL]http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/france_f/img/leather2.jpg[/URL] the breasts would look much better without that insane canyon between them :) Is it studded leather or some sort of molded plastic dress? beautiful model anyways! |
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| Thanks at all for your post and C&C (very useful for me ;-)) I have made several changes: - I have pronounced more the hips. - I have made the head a little more big. - I have put one section more in shoulders. This is the image: [img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/cambios.jpg"] |
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| I think you need to go to some lingerie sites for "Research" |
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| much better, but have a look at my link above.. Either that or have a smaller cleavage on the suit ^^ |
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| Still looks like a bloke with boobs !! |
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| Looks fine i think. Looks different too. People aren't gonna play your game and stop and think, jesus, this look like a guy with boobs ;) Lovely model :) |
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| absolut awesome... give her black hair, and she looks nearly like my girlfriend (nearly coz she doesn't wear that cool clothes... :) ) P.s.: AND noooooo my gf isn't a guy with boobs, so shut the **** up! :oP |
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| Its a good model but it could be a great model if it were sexier - i.e. more feminine. At the moment she's rather sexless - sort of a pre-op transexual - no feminine shape to the hips, legs or buttocks and the face is rather hard and masculine - still if thats the character that goes with the game then fine. A big pair of boobs alone doth not a woman make ! Especially if you've got a big lunchbox ! |
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| this is an image from the 3d modelling software I dont see that it is looked like a boy. [img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/3d.jpg"] |
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But it could look much better - compare : I know its an unfair comparison - but look at the shape of the hips and thighs. You need to inject a bit of this sexiness into your model to make it truly great. |
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| TGreat model. A little long in the limb, I tend towards that myself, though. On the breasts: They look like hemisphere's tacked on afterwards. Take a look at it from the top view, perhaps, and curve out the outer chest a little? Maybe a little less skintight over the breasts, more like cloth? I love the hair. |
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| Don't listen to them guys thinking that every woman is stereotypical... they come in all shapes and sizes, just as we guys do :) The girly looks great! |
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| @Ashmantle so true, I think L_Dravin's model is more realistic than the Lara model shown. I don't see the Lara model as better, all I can say is that it is in a different style, more cartoony and out of proportion to make her 'look' sexy or at least to accentuate her curves. |
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| looks awesome now |
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| cool model.....can i see the wire? |
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| Very cool model - and I can't model worth $&^% but... Check out the lara croft picie posted by smiff - See how the fabric goes between the boobs :P. Make yours like that (or at least add a bit of that), and it'll look much more realistic, unless your going for some wierd molded-suit look. |
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| Hi Folks, Methinks someone's been watching Underworld. Later, Jes |
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| Yes, I have seen underworld several times and is one of my sources ;-). But i havent wanted make the principal character of the film (Selene), i only want get the film atmosphere like cothes and other ideas, not film characters. Then, i will put the wire of the model. |
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| like love babe in black i whant here to have my children :) hmm seems like i have bin sitting in front of my computer to long aaaaaaah |
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| Looks great! A female character who doesn't look like a porn star, that's fresh. This one's got plenty personality, respect! If anything, I think the breasts should be further down; two head-lengths if I remember right. |
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| Thanks all. Well, i put que wire of the model and 2 images too. It have 2748 polygons. The guns: 440 polys each one. [img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/girlwire.jpg"] [img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/girl1.jpg"] [img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/girl2.jpg"] |
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| Me like! |
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| I think you should write some tutorials as every model I see of yours is superb work!! |
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| Even the wireframe view looks amazing =) |
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| OMFG! Alanis Morrisette on the prowl! Andy |
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| Thanks at all for the comments. I put a render with MAX (Not screenshot real time XD) for show the idea that i have. The idea is a mix between Silent Hill, R Evil, S Cell, etc... but all in 3D, not pre-rendered backgrounds like R Evil. The models and skeleton pose and animation of the pic is the low poly game models (the same models that i will use in the game) :-) . [img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/rnd.jpg"] |
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